Hi Riley, These are good. I'd probably omit the text on the side of the cigarette box (or only draw them if you think you can get the font and spacing perfectly)..otherwise it makes it a little distracting. The logos are good though and I'm glad you included those! Nice line variation, though your transitions might be able to be a bit smoother
Hi Riley, These are good. I'd probably omit the text on the side of the cigarette box (or only draw them if you think you can get the font and spacing perfectly)..otherwise it makes it a little distracting. The logos are good though and I'm glad you included those! Nice line variation, though your transitions might be able to be a bit smoother
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Great Job Riley, wonderful line variations.
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Great work Riley. I agree with you though on the details. But you did wonderfully on your line variations. Keep up the good work!
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