Denise, maybe make some areas in your drawing even brighter. Try adding the white colored pencil to define the shape on the inside rather than an outline. Great job!
Hi Denise, Good work on conveying the shape of the objects. It would improve the drawing to look more to the interior of each object. Typically when people start drawing they focus more on the edges. I want you guys to think about drawing from the interior of the object out..so the opposite..that way you'll notice more stuff going on such as reflections, highlights, midtones, etc. You've got that in a few areas on the wine glass and the bottle, but these areas could be brighter and areas around them could be more built up. - Deb
Denise, maybe make some areas in your drawing even brighter. Try adding the white colored pencil to define the shape on the inside rather than an outline. Great job!
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Denise, your choice of objects and the accuracy is great! You also did a good job shading. I love it! Connie
ReplyDeleteWOW. You did an awesome job. Very detailed in your shading and midtones. The bowl/plate with fruit is great!
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Hi Denise, Good work on conveying the shape of the objects. It would improve the drawing to look more to the interior of each object. Typically when people start drawing they focus more on the edges. I want you guys to think about drawing from the interior of the object out..so the opposite..that way you'll notice more stuff going on such as reflections, highlights, midtones, etc. You've got that in a few areas on the wine glass and the bottle, but these areas could be brighter and areas around them could be more built up. - Deb
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