You did a very good job accurately depicting both of your drawings, especially in your drawing of the screw driver. You show line variation very well, which helps to create the idea of a three dimensional form. Great Job!
Your 3d effect turned out well! I like the detail on the screwdriver. Something about the heel doesn't look as three dimensional though. Maybe make the lines harder at the bottom? From: Riley McEuen
Wow, I want to pick up that screwdriver for a project I have to finish at home. The lines and dimension of the shoe are very deep and more like an outline, but the lines of the screwdriver are very nicely balanced to create depth.
Nidia, you did a great job with the shoe and the screwdriver. They are both accurate drawings and the dimensions are good. You made them look 3 Dimensional with line variations. Good job! Connie Wyatt
That screwdriver is fantastic. It looks like you had a little trouble with the shoe, but I think your final product looks proportional and the shading is done well. Good job.
Hi Nidia, These are both great! Very impressive work. I would probably just erase those process lines on the shoe drawing to make it more complete and finished looking. If you can't get the eraser/left over pencil marks out, that probably means you're pressing down too hard at the beginning, so draw lightly at first while you're figuring out proportions, shape, etc. Nice work!! - Deb Karpman
Yeah Deb, I wish it had erased. I thought I was pressing down too hard myself but when I tried to do it lighter it still wouldn't erase good. Not sure what the issue is. I used a 6B. I can't figure out if it's my pencil, eraser, or paper. Help?
You did a very good job accurately depicting both of your drawings, especially in your drawing of the screw driver. You show line variation very well, which helps to create the idea of a three dimensional form. Great Job!
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Your 3d effect turned out well! I like the detail on the screwdriver. Something about the heel doesn't look as three dimensional though. Maybe make the lines harder at the bottom?
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Nidia, you did a wonderful job on both the show and screwdriver, but I especially loved the shoe,
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Wow, I want to pick up that screwdriver for a project I have to finish at home. The lines and dimension of the shoe are very deep and more like an outline, but the lines of the screwdriver are very nicely balanced to create depth.
ReplyDeleteNidia, you did a great job with the shoe and the screwdriver. They are both accurate drawings and the dimensions are good. You made them look 3 Dimensional with line variations. Good job! Connie Wyatt
ReplyDeleteThat screwdriver is fantastic. It looks like you had a little trouble with the shoe, but I think your final product looks proportional and the shading is done well. Good job.
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Hi Nidia, These are both great! Very impressive work. I would probably just erase those process lines on the shoe drawing to make it more complete and finished looking. If you can't get the eraser/left over pencil marks out, that probably means you're pressing down too hard at the beginning, so draw lightly at first while you're figuring out proportions, shape, etc. Nice work!! - Deb Karpman
ReplyDeleteYeah Deb, I wish it had erased. I thought I was pressing down too hard myself but when I tried to do it lighter it still wouldn't erase good. Not sure what the issue is. I used a 6B. I can't figure out if it's my pencil, eraser, or paper. Help?
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