Tuesday, May 8, 2012

Delorious Wilson Contour 1 & 2






7 comments:

  1. You did a very great job with your line variation and illustrating the change in thickness with each line. This helps create the idea of a 3-D form. The accuracy of the size it also nicely depicted.

    From: Amanda Howard

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  2. Delorious! It's Riley. I love the stem of the wine glass! The first one doesn't need the rim at the bottom. Just give the illusion of a 3D figure through a thick curved line.

    From: Riley McEuen

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  3. Well done, with both drawings. The shading, curves, and lines, provide dimension and allows them to feel realistic. The bottom of the wine glass was spectacular. I couldn't tell if the "bella" bottle was empty or full based it's bottom and shading. Very well done.

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  4. Wow Delorious you did a excellent job, The perfect illusion of a 3D figure.

    From: Denise Wilson

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  5. Good work Delorious! I think this is a great start. I think your dark lines could get even darker -- try pressing down as hard as possible with your 6B pencil -- that's the value you're going for with the dark lines.

    I agree with Connie that it's hard to tell if the "bella" bottle is empty of full..so this is just something to think about.

    I also like that you included the "Bella" text on the drawing, and it looks accurate too.

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  6. That above post was from me. -Deb Karpman

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  7. Thank you everybody for the comments. I will definitely focus on darkening in my next drawing. I was a little scared that it might be too much this time but a little more wouldnt hurt. Thanks a million!

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