You did a very great job with your line variation and illustrating the change in thickness with each line. This helps create the idea of a 3-D form. The accuracy of the size it also nicely depicted.
Delorious! It's Riley. I love the stem of the wine glass! The first one doesn't need the rim at the bottom. Just give the illusion of a 3D figure through a thick curved line.
Well done, with both drawings. The shading, curves, and lines, provide dimension and allows them to feel realistic. The bottom of the wine glass was spectacular. I couldn't tell if the "bella" bottle was empty or full based it's bottom and shading. Very well done.
Good work Delorious! I think this is a great start. I think your dark lines could get even darker -- try pressing down as hard as possible with your 6B pencil -- that's the value you're going for with the dark lines.
I agree with Connie that it's hard to tell if the "bella" bottle is empty of full..so this is just something to think about.
I also like that you included the "Bella" text on the drawing, and it looks accurate too.
Thank you everybody for the comments. I will definitely focus on darkening in my next drawing. I was a little scared that it might be too much this time but a little more wouldnt hurt. Thanks a million!
You did a very great job with your line variation and illustrating the change in thickness with each line. This helps create the idea of a 3-D form. The accuracy of the size it also nicely depicted.
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Delorious! It's Riley. I love the stem of the wine glass! The first one doesn't need the rim at the bottom. Just give the illusion of a 3D figure through a thick curved line.
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Well done, with both drawings. The shading, curves, and lines, provide dimension and allows them to feel realistic. The bottom of the wine glass was spectacular. I couldn't tell if the "bella" bottle was empty or full based it's bottom and shading. Very well done.
ReplyDeleteWow Delorious you did a excellent job, The perfect illusion of a 3D figure.
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Good work Delorious! I think this is a great start. I think your dark lines could get even darker -- try pressing down as hard as possible with your 6B pencil -- that's the value you're going for with the dark lines.
ReplyDeleteI agree with Connie that it's hard to tell if the "bella" bottle is empty of full..so this is just something to think about.
I also like that you included the "Bella" text on the drawing, and it looks accurate too.
That above post was from me. -Deb Karpman
ReplyDeleteThank you everybody for the comments. I will definitely focus on darkening in my next drawing. I was a little scared that it might be too much this time but a little more wouldnt hurt. Thanks a million!
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